Absolutely love what you have here! Maybe we can shrink the text a bit for it to be 2 lines?

I’m David Kelly–frontman of Tethra, national-level classic physique competitor, and a men’s transformation coach who rebuilt his life from the inside out.

I had to learn every lesson the hard way through building and rebuilding myself. I had to become the man I wished I had to guide me.

And now I help other men transform in the same way.